Posted by: Heather | April 27, 2007

Haiku Friday – Senses

(I used to do Haiku Friday on my OLD blog…so why not steal the concept from myself?)

 senses.jpg

When I close my eyes

I feel the touch of your hand

Caressing my face

II 

When I close my eyes

I smell the scent of your need

When you are near me

III 

When I close my eyes

I hear the growl in your throat

As you say my name

IV 

When I close my eyes

I taste your sweet saltiness

And I bite my lip

When I close my eyes

I see the unlikeliness

Yet I still see love


Responses

  1. You make haikus seem easy Heather. How do you do it? Kim

  2. Once I get in the rhythm it’s hard to get out of it!

    Thanks Kim!

  3. Those are beautiful!

  4. Thanks Lola!

  5. Love these. The image reminded me of something I “painted” a while back. Thanks for that… I’m going to go try and find it now.

  6. Thanks Jeff- I hope you find it – I would love to see it!!

  7. [...] lead me to an amazing post by Writer Chick today, and Heather wrote some Haiku that included an image that awakened another part of me I don’t allow to come to the surface [...]

  8. Passion that springs from true and abiding love – there’s nothing better. Beautifully done.
    WC

  9. Writerchick…(Oh my God writerchick commented on my blog) – thanks so much for coming by and reading. Thank you for your kind words! I hope you will be back!

  10. Nice…I have never written a haiku before, but now I am going to try :)

  11. Cool!! I love Haiku when I get going in them!


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