(I used to do Haiku Friday on my OLD blog…so why not steal the concept from myself?)
I
When I close my eyes
I feel the touch of your hand
Caressing my face
II
When I close my eyes
I smell the scent of your need
When you are near me
III
When I close my eyes
I hear the growl in your throat
As you say my name
IV
When I close my eyes
I taste your sweet saltiness
And I bite my lip
V
When I close my eyes
I see the unlikeliness
Yet I still see love
You make haikus seem easy Heather. How do you do it? Kim
By: krkbaker on April 28, 2007
at 6:49 am
Once I get in the rhythm it’s hard to get out of it!
Thanks Kim!
By: Naughty Heather on April 28, 2007
at 11:41 am
Those are beautiful!
By: Lola on April 29, 2007
at 8:26 am
Thanks Lola!
By: Naughty Heather on April 29, 2007
at 9:17 am
Love these. The image reminded me of something I “painted” a while back. Thanks for that… I’m going to go try and find it now.
By: JWT on April 29, 2007
at 9:40 am
Thanks Jeff- I hope you find it – I would love to see it!!
By: Naughty Heather on April 29, 2007
at 9:56 am
[...] lead me to an amazing post by Writer Chick today, and Heather wrote some Haiku that included an image that awakened another part of me I don’t allow to come to the surface [...]
By: Poetic Love Affair « The World Through My Eyes on April 29, 2007
at 10:11 am
Passion that springs from true and abiding love – there’s nothing better. Beautifully done.
WC
By: writerchick on April 29, 2007
at 10:39 am
Writerchick…(Oh my God writerchick commented on my blog) – thanks so much for coming by and reading. Thank you for your kind words! I hope you will be back!
By: Naughty Heather on April 29, 2007
at 10:48 am
Nice…I have never written a haiku before, but now I am going to try
By: Manoj Khatri on May 16, 2007
at 7:59 am
Cool!! I love Haiku when I get going in them!
By: Naughty Heather on May 16, 2007
at 8:14 am