Tonight, I finally finished the first chapter of this book I have been working on for MONTHS. We know what’s up with Faith and her boyfriend.
I figured out the way to depict a critical, dramatic scene without melodrama. Because what I don’t want to be is melodramatic. Or clichèd. I get plenty of that in real life, thankyouverymuch!
So, yay!!
Now, where to begin Chapter Two, and Lily’s story.
Probably with drunken almost-sex. Wonder if people will believe that teenagers really do all this stuff? Cause they do.
We did.
Well…. I didn’t.
P.S. If you want a critique, I’d be happy to read your work.
By: Brian on June 21, 2009
at 7:47 am
Brian-
I want to get it a bit more fleshed out, so to speak. It has gone SO fast today – amazing – I think I’ll be done with Chapter 3 by the end of the week…
Thanks so much – I’ll be in touch as soon as I’m sure it isn’t utter crap.
By: Heather on June 21, 2009
at 6:10 pm
Keep it up then. I never think my stuff is any good, so, flesh it out and send it on.
By: Brian on June 22, 2009
at 7:19 am